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The Shooting Star

One second. An extending empty endless corridor.
Darkness creeping in more and more and more . . .
Until suddenly, flash!
A shimmering silver shooting star sending shining sparkles
Across this universe of endless darkness.
Before I can collect my thoughts,
Imagination takes over.
Planets become colourful catalysts!
Saturn's rings spiralling, circling,
Twisting, turning.
Other stars shining to the beat of my heart,
Racing and pounding, a true piece of art.
Within a blink of an eye I'm back from afar,
But I shall never forget that shooting star.

by Brooke Evans-Harries (10)
Ysgol Gymraeg Glan Cleddau, Haverfordwest

Competition - Out Of This World

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