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The Perfect Goal

Jack passed the ball to John, then John rainbow-flicked the ball to Adam and Adam chipped it. Goal! Adam did it for the second time, just a minute before the final whistle. Adam skidded in, facing his fans in glory. The cheering became the best moment of his life. The other team glanced as quick as they could to the referee. 'No goal!' Adam looked in shock. Then they tried harder. Then Jack curled it past the goalpost. 'Finally, goal!' Beep! Beep! Beep! sounded the alarm. He put it on snooze so he could dream some more...

by Noor Ul Ain Chaudhary (11)
St Elizabeth's Catholic Primary School, Coventry

Competition - Once Upon A Time

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