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We had crashed on the mysterious purple planet discovered six months ago. We decided to explore. On the way to Base 4, we came across deadly mushrooms and a boiling lake. The mushrooms had a very deadly gas and the lake was very hot. We were intimidated by the bubbles of the boiling lake. As I was walking, one of the bubbles exploded. The red-hot fire burnt through my space suit. I was suffocating but I was saved by my other space suit in my backpack. We had achieved our goal - Base 4, finally.

by Henry Bonetti (8)
St John Fisher RC Primary School, London

Competition - Once Upon A Time

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