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The Life Of A Cub Whose Heart Feels Hollow

One day, a cub was born. Two years later, he couldn't fit in with the rest. He had lost his mother in a hunt and everybody hated him because he bit them when he was a cub. Although he was the oldest, no one liked him because he had anger problems. He should have used SUMO: Stop, Understand, Move On. So he stopped, understood and moved on. He said, 'Sorry, I did not mean to hurt you, can we be friends?' The other cubs said, 'Yes!' They lived happily ever after, remembering to always use SUMO.

by Chloe Favill (9)
Holy Trinity Catholic Primary School, Bilston

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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