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Space Wonder

As the mist cleared, I could see a myriad of sand dunes in the distance. The crimson-red liquid was endless and telling me to come closer. The bioluminescent flower-like objects were like amethyst, glowing in its true beauty. As I got back to the spaceship, lurking around, I could see Steven investigating a glistening rock. The rock looked like tiny gems glowing in the darkness. As I ventured off, I saw a snowy place with a magnetic force field surrounding an alien. After he'd tried to grab me, his huge coils cradled me in the dance of death...

by Mackenzie Sawers (9)
St Joseph's Catholic Primary School, Bristol

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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