Shocking day! I was made to see that witch, Granny, and take her mum's foul cakes. The argument was colossal. Mum won. I grabbed my basket and stormed out. I arrived at Gran's house. I felt different, I couldn't hear her breathing. I heard a low rumbling noise emanating from Gran's bed. This beardy block appeared, wielding an axe. He bellowed, 'Have no fear!' I turned my head, reached into the basket, got one of the cakes, hurtled it towards the freak in the bed and knocked it out. I turned to my left and said, 'My hero'.
by Erin Ward (10)
Dunard Street Primary School, Glasgow
Competition - Once Upon a Time
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