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Cave Trap

'Here's a story kids,' the old man said. 'Once upon a time I was in a cave, a dark gloomy cave. When suddenly I stepped hard on a rock that had strange markings on it. When I stood off it, it glowed. Then giant rocks started to roll towards me. The rocks were as big as the cave and were coming closer to me fast. They would crush me. There was no way out. I was trapped!' 'Excuse me for asking Sir,' a young boy said. 'How did you get out?' 'I didn't,' the old man said as he disappeared.

by Barney Hopkins (11)
The Firs School, Chester

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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