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A Bitter Winter

Everywhere was snow and ice. Pellets of frozen rain rapidly blitzed the ground. The whole area was isolated and abandoned. When the snow hit the ground it joined a quilt of snow that seemed to cover the world. Nobody was there, just enchanting little foxes and deer. Trees stood tall and proud with witch-like hands gripping the snow as tightly as they possibly could. The sky, a group of crystals, all hunched together to form something mesmerising. A zealous and vigorous wind hastened past and forced the trees to sway from side to side destroying everything in its sight.

by Humaira Wardak (10)
Parkinson Lane Community Primary School, Halifax

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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