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Neptune's Kingdom

On a shore was a door that led
To a magical kingdom full of happiness.
All the smallest merfolk went up to their beds
Full of sparkling coral and fresh laid seaweed.

On a shore was a door that led
To a magical kingdom full of joy.
Their little wings as soft as silk
Who wouldn't love wishing with little pixie boys.

On a shore was a door that led
To a magical kingdom full of love.
So many animals! I can't choose, so let's go to the zoo.
Unicorns, dragons, Nessie and Pegasus.

On a shore was no door that led
To a magical kingdom full of love, joy and happiness.
But all that was left was a tiny planet not red
But blue so the name's clear but where's my door?

by Savannah Martin (11)
Craighill Primary School, Tain


Competition - Out Of This World

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