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The Family Of The Sun

The family of the sun,
The family of the sun,
Here are nine planets
In the family of the sun.

Mercury is hot
And Mercury is small,
Mercury has no atmosphere,
It's just a rocky ball.

Venus has thick clouds
That hide what is below.
The air is foul, the air is hot,
It rotates very slow.

We love the Earth, our home,
Its oceans and its trees,
We eat its food,
We breathe its air,
So no pollution please.

Mars is very red,
It's also dry and cold,
Someday you might visit Mars,
If you are really bold.

Great Jupiter is big,
We've studied it a lot,
We found its six moons
And a big spot.

Saturn has great wings,
We wondered what they were,
Now we know they're icy rocks,
Which we saw as a blur.

Uranus and Neptune,
We don't know much about,
Maybe you will study them
And then we'll all find out.

Pluto's last in line,
It's furthest from the sun,
It's small and cold and icy too,
To land there will not be fun.

The family of the sun,
The family of the sun,
There are nine planets,
Now our journey's done.

by Nikul Gohil (10)
Brocks Hill Primary School, Leicester

Competition - Out Of This World

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