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S nowflakes fall from the sky softly
N obody knows snowflakes are falling down outside
O n the hillside people watching snow swirling around
W hen children are tucked up in bed cosy and warm
F lakes are falling, winter is here, all the children playing in the snow
L akes are getting cold and slippery, everyone is slipping
A ll the children sledging in the snow
K eep warm because it is cold
E veryone loves the snow, enjoy the sun
S ledging through the snow everyone is having fun.

by Tasmina Uddin (7)
St Luke's CE Primary School, Oldham

Competition - My First Acrostic

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