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She moves with the gentle sway of the Northern Lights
She will not bite and does no harm
She is always steady and calm
Aurora is my loyal horse
Everyone should know that of course.

When I brush her she does not care
She has amazing glossy hair
Her beautiful chestnut coat shimmers in the sun
When you ride her you will have lots of fun!

She is such a caring soul
Aurora was so kind even when she was a foal
Her tail sways to and fro,
She will not buck, she is not a foe.
Her magnificent eyes transfix on me
There is a lock to my heart and Aurora has the key.

by Emilija Atkins (10)
Hemdean House School, Reading

Competition - Out Of This World

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