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Charlie's Chipped Ice Delight

Charlie swung open his gates and stared in awe, his whole town had been covered in a snowy blanket. He walked back into the chocolate factory and had an idea to create a new treat with sweet, snowy frosting sprinkles. Unfortunately, the Oompa Loompas didn't have enough sugar. The toffee didn't work and the Smarties were too crunchy. Suddenly, Charlie had an idea to get snow from outside. The Oompa Loompas stirred honey in the snow and mixed food colouring in it too. Charlie laughed and took some sweets to his family and friends. Everyone was delighted.

by Laiqa Ahmad (8)
St Peter's Primary School, Galashiels

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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