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The Star Of Happiness

Walking delicately, as the snow fell down like tears from the sky, a little girl called Grace wandered through the pitch-black forest, looking for her shining star. Eventually she came across a mysterious box, guarded by enchantments and evil snowmen. Quickly she tiptoed round the wicked snowmen and knocked off their heads with a stick. As quick as a flash Grace seized the box and sprinted down the frozen pathway of dread, whilst trying to break the enchantment. Finally the lid opened, spell broken, and there, shining brightly, was the star of happiness, shining more brightly than ever before.

by Katie Green (11)
Fulfen Primary School, Burtnwood

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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