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Christmas Surprise

Here I am standing with my friends, when suddenly I am being taken away. I feel like I am on a roller coaster, kidnapped and alone. I sleep in a crowded, dark cupboard, not sure what is happening. I do not like the dark! Everything is quiet until suddenly I hear a rustling of paper. Confused, worried, puzzled a huge, screaming monster approaches. Violently shook, landing on the floor with a thud and finally light is everywhere...
‘It’s amazing!’ the excited voice shouts. ‘Just what I wanted, a new teddy!’

by Heidi Doherty (10)
St Benedict's Catholic Primary School, Wigan

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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