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The Nightmare

The bubbles fizzed at me wildly. I expected at any moment the Loch Ness monster would jump out at me. The water turned a murky green. Nervously, I dared to put my foot in. The water was so hot, my toes began to sizzle like sausages. I felt like a prisoner being tortured. My whole head was getting dizzier and dizzier. My heart skipped a beat. Like an evil clown, the water appeared to mock me. Horrified, I stepped away from the edge. The water, which was turning a mouldy yellow, delivered an evil stare... 'Michael, just have a bath!

by Victoria Fisher (9)
Winnersh Primary School, Berkshire

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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