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The Power Of Love When You Believe

Falling slowly, the ivory snow fell from the crystal sky onto Bloodless, the paunchy snowman. Living in a warm town, Bloodless and his family found it hard to live.

One tragic day, whilst he was out, his family caught a gust of warm air and melted. When Bloodless arrived back home he was devastated to find his melted family. 'I'll have to build you back,' Bloodless shouted.

Trekking through fields and through lakes Bloodless found his snow. Arriving back in the garden, Bloodless made his family back and they all lived happily ever after, until the sun shone again...

by Lauren McGrath (10)
Wellgate Primary School, South Yorkshire

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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