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The Undead Army

How it hurt! This haunting tune. Where was the eerie music coming from? It was gradually pulling me towards the darkened gates that led to the moss covered gravestones. Each note drew me closer, step by step. A crescendo, so sharp my ears were nearly deafened, drew me in before I could hesitate. I tried to escape the melody but the music controlled me, I had no choice. Suddenly the old gravestones fell onto the ground with a terrifying thump! Soon an army of the undead had surrounded me. What was going to happen? Could I escape their evil wrath?

by Henry Warren (9)
Elham CE Primary School, Kent

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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