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Outside This World

Off from out of this Earth,
Away from the moon
Releasing embers of energy and passion
Beyond imagination.

So passionate it makes me blind,
Once and again it shined,
Celestial stars,
Twinkling, shooting beyond Mars.
So elegant and eerie,
Out of question theory.

A dark beauty dressed with diamonds,
This I can't describe,
Such a beauty at night.
What a delight!
Such an unknown mystery,
One of the greatest in history.

Oh shining star,
So high, so far,
Shining bright,
At a far height,
What do you tell me now?

by Lidia Goonatilaka (10)
Westbrook Primary School, Hounslow

Competition - Out Of This World

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