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Sondus' Magical Story

... a magical kingdom. They were so excited to look around but before they started looking around they saw a bright yellow castle. Some fairies lived there with some frogs that could talk. When they started looking around the magical kingdom, they were walking and the dog started barking at a fairy sitting on a toadstool. Emma and Ben were so shocked because they had never seen a fairy in their life. Suddenly, they heard something coming from the bushes, it was an ugly, dirty and stinky troll. It had a tail. But he was very kind so he took them to his house.

When they got there the dog was interested in the candy cane on the side of his house, so he started licking it. The troll asked them, 'Do you want to come inside?'

They said, 'Yes!'

When they went inside they asked the troll, 'Can we have a party?'

The troll said, 'Of course we can have a party.' So they had their party all day long and they had lots of fun.

At the end of the party the troll gave them cake and presents. It was time for Emma and Ben to go home and they hoped they would have another party like that.

by Sondus Alkizwini (6)
Broadfields Primary School, Edgware

Competition - My First Story 2017

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