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Constance's Magical Story

Ben and I saw a beautiful castle and an old door, a giant door.

We found a fairy with glittery wings and long pink hair. The fairy was wearing a pink dress.

Before we made our wish, a smelly ogre with yellow teeth stomped over!

The ogre led us to his sweet house. We walked round the back into his colourful garden.

Ben and I had fun. We gave presents to the ogre. The ogre was happy.

Ben and I ate some cake with orange icing and glitter. 'We're not going to have room for our dinner!' said Ben.

by Constance Hutchings
Merton Infant School, Basingstoke

Competition - My First Story 2017

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