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Joshua's Magical Story

They opened the door and a little shiny fairy flew out. She wanted to describe the magical world to Emma and Ben. She whispered, 'This magical world is enchanted. Be aware of the frightening, slimy monster!'

Through the trees there came the monster. The smelly hog monster said, 'In the forest near the wolf bridge, there is a candy house.'

Emma and Ben followed the loud monster. On their way wolves were chasing them. Luckily the monster had this glue with him so the wolves got stuck in it.

To celebrate escaping the snow wolves they had a party in the candy house. The fairy used her magic wand to make two of the balloons into heart shapes.

She was proud of Emma and Ben for being so brave in the enchanted forest so she decided to give them three presents and some leftover cake. Emma and Ben ate their leftover cake and walked through the magic door.

by Joshua Titherington
Crossley Fields Junior & Infant School, Mirfield

Competition - My First Story 2017

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