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Florence's Magical Story

... the castle of fairy-tale creatures. The whole thing was covered in crystals, diamonds and gems from top to bottom.

Whilst they were walking, a fairy on a toadstool stopped them and said, 'Please tell me if you or your dog has seen an old warty, smelly goblin.'

'No, sorry.'

'Well maybe we could look for you.'

'Oh yes please,' said the fairy.

Suddenly, they heard a voice. It started as a high voice then it got lower and lower. Ben and Emma jumped in surprise, an awful smell rose into the air.

But when they turned around they saw a goblin standing in the doorway of a candy house.

'Welcome,' said the goblin. 'I heard what the fairy said. The reason she wanted to know was because we were throwing a party.'

'Can we come?'


He welcomed them into the back garden where the fairy was waiting. They had the best party ever.

Then it was time to go home. I wonder where the magic door will take them next?

by Florence Unwin
Bowdon Church School, Altrincham

Competition - My First Story 2017

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