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Staring at the sparkly night as I stare at the glittery
I spot a star sign that looks like Taurus!
Gummy bears spill out of a unicorn's mouth
As a gingerbread man is building a gingerbread house!
I rule Candylandia as an astonishing queen,
Known as beautiful as a unicorn so it seems.
Joyfully I swim in the chocolate ocean like a supple
With a colossal chocolate dragon
Soaring through the pink cotton candy clouds
Whilst the radiant, primrose sun beams
I ride on the Pegasus, as on the top of my voice,
I scream!

by Sophie Njai (10)
St James CE Primary School

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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