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The Enchanted Garden

Fresh waterfalls as blue as the beautiful sky,
This place has never been discovered. I wonder why?
Birds tweeting high in the air,
Singing beautifully way up there.
The sun shining down on the damp grass,
And the dew-kissed flowers glistening like polished brass.
Then suddenly I heard a strange noise.
It made me run really fast.
Breathlessly I stopped and turned around.
And there they were. 
Flamingos, sipping pure water
From the blue lake.
But then I woke up
It was sadly all a dream.

by Adanma Okolie
Bronte School, Gravesend

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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