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A Whole Other World

I will tell you a dream
A planet that's quite far
To reach beyond the depths
And see the fantasies that are:
Monsters, fairies, goblins
And a giraffe playing a guitar
With candyfloss clouds
Transport in stylish cars
Though one little girl
Decided to venture
To see what it's like
On a real adventure
Jelly Tots as traffic lights
There's slime as the sea
You would start to wonder
What else could there be?
She swam in the slime
Jumped from cloud to cloud
Rode on an elephant
'So fun!' she shouted aloud
Now off she must go
There are galaxies awaiting
Another adventure ahead
Which she's anticipating.

by Alysia Last

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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