The instant door swung open, Emma and Ben found themselves flying through the air. Even Sven, the dog, was there. Looking down, they saw what looked like a giant raccoon. 'Give us back our chocolate bars!' shouted the people. Sven yelped and yapped at the smell of the chocolate bars in the strange raccoons' sack. The only bars the raccoon would get his thieving hands on tonight were the steel bars of his prison cell.
The three heroes got a special shiny chocolate rosette each that glistened in the bright sun. Then they flew back to get home before the sun melted their rosettes.
by Regen Lissenburg
Boroughbridge Primary School, York
Competition - My First Story 2017
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