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Harry's Space Story

... space! They were floating away from Earth with their very own jetpack. They landed on a very dry planet in another galaxy called... Mentor.
As they landed on the planet, Ben was about to touch a star when a lonely alien appeared.
He brought the children inside his flying saucer and gave them a tour!
They were having a wonderful time with the alien, including the bit with the loop the loop.
But another alien, which was scary-looking, stuck out its tongue and tried to eat them! But they escaped.
After that, they were teleported back to Earth and were back walking the dog, as if nothing ever happened.

by Harry Eve (7)
Lydeard St Lawrence Primary School, Taunton


Competition - My First Story 2017

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