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Poppy's Space Story

Dotty, Ben and I were in the dark… but then I saw the Big Dipper, then I saw Earth. There was an alien waving from his flying saucer so I waved back. It was heading for Mars. Without warning, Mars disappeared.
Dotty then howled. We told him to calm down, then I realised we were flying. I loved it, but a minute later I heard something. It turned around and I saw an alien!
A second later we were sucked up. Dotty turned upside down. I felt terrible. I tried not to get us sucked up, but it was no use.
Thankfully, it was not as bad as I thought it was. It was a friendly alien. 'Hey look Ben. Its name is on the flying saucer.' Her name was Martha.
Suddenly a massive monster was invading. 'Help!' we screamed. Dotty growled.
We went super fast to get away. I will never forget my adventure and especially my new friend, Martha.

by Poppy Leigh Beel
South Ferriby Primary School, Barton-Upon-Humber

Competition - My First Story 2017

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