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Down In The Tomb

Down in the tomb
Down in the tomb
The corners smell musty
Pathways taste dusty
It is dark, not much light
Quiet, the company of pharaohs and mummies
In the tomb it's dark, a little bit lit with candles.

Down in the tomb
Down in the tomb
The walls are crumbly with hard stone
The fences are made out of wood
I saw a skeletal figure
I heard some haunted strange crying noises.

Down in the tomb
Down in the tomb
I saw some mummification
I saw some embalmers wrapping the dead body up
I saw glass canopic jars
I felt the musty air
I felt the dust on the walls
I heard some screeching noises
I heard strange stomps on the floor
I saw the Jackal monument master of mummification
Down in the tomb
Down in the tomb
It's a scary night
Down in the tomb.

by Patience Danahay (7)
Cambridge Primary School, Cumbria


Competition - Out Of This World

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