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The Monster Under My Bed

In my dream I heard a noise

It was loud and scary so I cuddled my toys

When I went to check the time

All I saw was sticky gooey slime

Then I thought I saw a ghost.

If you were here you'd be scared the most!

Then I said, 'Come on out of the bed,

Come and show your monstrous head.'

Then the monster jumped out of the bed,

He wasn't that scary,

He was just a bigger version of Ted.

Then he spoke as low as a bear

Then lifted his armpits and showed off his hair

It was too gross, I had to scream,

Then I woke up and realised it was just a dream.

by Lexi Knipe (8)
St Ambrose Barlow Catholic Primary School

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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