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The Day Of The Night

On the day of the night,

When all stood still.

On the day of the night,

Where sweets were filled with salt.

On the day of the night,

When light was not seen.

The day of the night,

One to forget.


I ran through twigs,

I ran through webs.

I slipped on trees,

And trudged through ditches.


Bees walked around,

Dogs flew before they talked.

Humans weren't to be seen,

But I'd been left behind.

With no one around,

And sure to be doomed.

But hope was not lost!

by Kieran Rodd (11)
The Westerings Primary School - Essex

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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