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Lost In Time

Where are you beautiful world, I am lost?

Do you have any more chances and what's the cost?

Please set me free I'll change my life whole,

'You've had too many chances, my answer is no!'


I pray and pray and I've finally been forgiven.

The world gave

me a fifteenth chance,

now I have to do its bidding!


My ghastly figure whooshed

through the air.

He gets to be free...

How is this fair?


Thankfully the horrifying dream here has come to an end,

I wake up scared and terrified lying in my comfy, cosy bed.

by Theo Bull
Craig-Yr-Hesg Primary School - Wales

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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