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Bubbles And Shells

When I got into my bed last night I did not expect to be,

Awoken by an octopus staring right at me,

It was then I noticed the tank stuck to my back,

And bubbles coming out of me leaving a bubbly track,

Then I saw in front a beautiful see-through house,

Inside I could see my family calling my name out loud,

I swam as fast as I could and somersaulted through the bubble door,

And landed with a clatter on the shell-covered floor,

I remember feeling happy, full of joy and glee,

My family and I in our dream world under the deep, blue sea.

by Louis Henkes (7)
Thomas's Clapham - London

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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