Young Writers, social media
Young Writers
Young Writers

Feedback Form

Click here if you would like to add a comment.

Thank For your Feedback


Midnight Monster

Inky darkness is all around

I hold my breath and hear a sound.


Shallow breathing, a scratch, a thud!

My mind is racing and chills my blood.


I will myself to take a peek

Out of bed across my room I sneak.


I pull open the curtain with a magician's flair

But sadly there is no white rabbit there!


An enormous monster fills the window, wall to wall

Hairy nostrils, yellow fangs and a curdling call.


I turn on my heels and dash back to bed

But it's too late, he's bitten off my head!

by Imogen Masters (10)
Great Creaton Primary School - Northamptonshire

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

Copyright remains with the author.