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I Dreamed A Dream

I dreamed a dream in bed last night

Of places most bizarre

Of ponds of Pepsi

And fish that played air guitar


Of purple paths of jellybeans

And grass of green peas

Of chocolate homes and toffee gnomes

Such things I've never seen


Of glinting, misty castle stars

And clouds of thick cream

Of paper boats and biscuit goats

An unusual and strange affair


I flew past trees on a unicorn

A white cloud gave me a little scare

Past eight-legged rats and purple cats

A world so full of thrills

I dived under a bubbly lake

Through whipped cream and gummy bears

And swam towards a ghostly figure

And tried to swim back

It felt as if my feet were as big as giant's feet

And down below the treacle waves

I spied a dragon

And suddenly I woke to find my pillows eating me!

by Ruby Seren Thomas (10)
All Saints Catholic Primary School

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

Copyright remains with the author.