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Uniberry Land

There she is, my beautiful companion,

With her silver tail, swishing around,

Twilight, my girl, is a champion,

Beckoning me with the neighing sound.


Out I go from my bed,

Various notions filling my head;

What adventure could it be?

When I cross the splendid sea.


Off I go, on Twilight's back,

To another enchanted land.

Carrying my heavy rucksack,

I'm entering Uniberry Land.


I leap off Twilight's mane,

Excitement and happiness fills me.

It is really insane,

I can't believe what I see.

Flowers blossoming happily,

Birds twittering round and round,

Blueberry bushes flourishing merrily,

Making lots of sound.


Kind people everywhere;

A whole land in peace;

Lots of entertainment over there,

Let the joy increase.


A waterfall of mango juice,

In a forest of strawberry trees.

With the magic to cure any bruise,

Accompanied by a fruity breeze.


Soft tender hands stroked me,

While the sunlight kissed me.

Slowly I opened my eyes to see,

My mum whispering, 'Good morning,' to me.

by Anjana Ravindran (10)
Burlington Junior School

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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