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Once Upon A Dream

Out of the corner of my eye,

'Not again,' I sigh!

'Couldn't you wait until next week?

Exams are on, I need my sleep!'


Under my duvet, warm and snug I see the light

pouring from under the door, what a sight!

Oh, these monsters are insane,

'Next time, try my brother, he's a pain.'


At the end of the bed, they stop and wait.

'Don't be too loud boys, let's get that straight.'

'Roar! Grr! Boo! Boo!' they scream.

Everyone's laughing, hugging - what a dream!

Aww... they brought me a pig - I think!

Mike and Sully, my crazy pals from Monsters Inc!

by Sydney Rae Robinson (10)
Rowans Primary School - Hertfordshire

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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