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The War

The war was raging. Bailey had turned herself into molten lava and was erupting every volcano in the realm. The air was hot and smouldering. The water creatures were throwing their enchanted water spears, but they had no effect against the wisp's boiling lava. Slowly the water creatures began to dry out from the hot, smoky mist. Bailey and the lava wisps could see victory in their sights, but with every fallen water creature Bailey started to feel regret. In her heart, she believed that they could once again live together in harmony and share the realm.

by Courtenay Jade Morrow (9)
Victoria Park Primary School - Northern Ireland

Competition - Crazy Creatures

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