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Blazier Meets Earth!

Blazier raced around the playground, giant and purple, on her three chubby legs and nine pointy toes. Scared, screaming children ran to hide and she chased and grabbed with her six waving, hairy arms. Her green, snake-like tongue slithered and her red-hot, fiery hair sent fireballs zooming around the yard. Suddenly, Blazier gave up and just sat and sobbed. 'Why isn't Earth like Planet Blaze where everyone likes me?' All she wanted was a friend to play games with and hug. That's when Poppy appeared with a tissue and a smile.

'Maybe Earth will be fun after all.'

by Lily Slaughter (10)
West Park Primary School - Wales

Competition - Crazy Creatures

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