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Mr Plaque

I was twisting and turning, rolling and rumbling but I didn't know what it was. I screamed, 'Argh!'

Mum came upstairs to see me, 'Where does it hurt?'

'I don't know!' I screamed loudly.

My mum took me to the dentist and they pulled it out. Now I know who it was; Mr Tooth Pecker hiding underneath my tooth came out as a yellow, yucky, slimy monster. The dentist removed it. The yucky, gooey monster got too comfy in my dingy mouth and housed there. I learnt a lesson from that day, to never stop brushing my teeth!

by Rumana Bapu (9)
Eldon Primary School - Lancashire

Competition - Crazy Creatures

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