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Up, Up, Up!

I was in space as I saw,

A doughnut with a head!

It was shouting noises like a dragon,

Then, some chicken nuggets in a wagon!

Up, up, up.


Next, a hairy pirate with a sword,

All of a sudden he roared.

Now came a spotty cat with pink pants,

But strangely it liked munching ants!

Up, up, up.


But next was a mat,

Only with a hat!

It was dancing gracefully,

As it was jumping on twinkling stars.

Not only a hat, he was dancing with a gnat,

As they drifted through space!

Up, up, up.

by Lauren Parish (10)
Cliffe Woods Primary School - Kent

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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