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My Dream Rabbit

She made me fall in love for the first time.

She made me touch her soft, brown ears.

She made me look her in the eyes.

She made me cuddle her body for hours.

She was Ninus.

She made me see how beautiful she was.

She made me happy again when I was sad.

She made me smile when she licked my cheek.

She made me laugh when she ate my chocolate.

She made my mom angry when she pooped in the living room.

She made me cry when she ran away...

I will always love my first rabbit.

Ninus is dead now!

by Lucca Modin (9)
St George's School Edgbaston - West Midlands

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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