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The Desert Island

As I sleep in my bed at night,

I dream of a desert all sunny and bright.


I see coconut trees, caves and sand,

I'm searching for my treasure where it can be found.


With Patch, my parrot, as happy as can be,

I know this treasure is going home with me.


I suddenly wake up with a grin on my face,

Can't wait for next bedtime to go back to this place.

by Callum Nash (9)
Park View Junior School - Hampshire

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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