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Was It Real?

I woke up (or did I?)

In a future world of robots.

I must have been transported

Through a portal made of blurred dots!

 

I looked around me, filled with fear,

I couldn't believe my eyes!

Up above, what made me jump?

Flying cars zoomed through the skies!

 

And when I looked closer still,

What fully filled me with dread

In the windows of each metal beast

Was what looked like a robot head!

 

In front were glass skyscrapers,

Linked by transparent tubes.

They towered up to the highest level,

Filled with robotic cubes.

 

I scarpered fast from the hill

That I had stood upon.

I was searching for that portal but

I found that it was gone!

 

I was tired and I wanted a bed,

I looked around aghast.

And then I found some nice soft soil

And fell asleep real fast.

 

I woke up with a dreadful start,

I was in my bed!

Had the portal put me back there...

Or was it all a dream instead?

by Louie Sach (8)
Little Thurrock Primary School - Essex


Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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