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The Jungle Adventure

One sunny day, Emma and Ben were walking the dog. Suddenly, they came upon a magic door hidden in a tree. As Emma and Ben opened the magic door, they found themselves in a jungle swinging through the trees.

All of a sudden, a big, poisonous snake appeared from nowhere and glided towards them. It was so scary and menacing that Emma and Ben became frightened. The snake came after them and they ran as fast as their little legs could carry them.

Luckily for them, a lion nearly came to their rescue. Emma and Ben rode on the lion's back as the lion flew like the wind across the skies.

Finally, they swung out of the spooky jungle and they lived happily ever after.

by Elijah Edoigiawerie (6)
St Peter's CE Primary School - South London

Competition - My First Story 2017

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