In the deep blue ocean
Hook was causing a commotion
'Captain Hook, you can never defeat me
I'm the best fighter there can ever be!' Peter said
'You shan't get rid of me
You shall stay, and be dead!'
Like a snail, Hook tried to swim
But Peter was way better than him
Hook was all over the place
Not how Peter normally finds it
With beauty and grace.
Splish, splash, sploosh
Sploosh, splish, splash
'Ha, you're never going to win.'
The sea laughed with him.
Horrible Hook began to sink to the bottom like a baby attempting to swim
Peter was surely going to beat him
Peter had won against Hook.
Then I shut the book...
by Holly Walter (10)
Bishop Lonsdale CE Academy - Staffordshire
Competition - Once Upon A Dream
Copyright remains with the author.