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The Day I Lost My Name

As it became dark

I did not know what to say

it was my last day

of living the pirate's dream


Just as you came

I lost all my fame

and attacked my crew

I shouldn't have doubted you


I got so jealous

and went all reckless

being such a fool

and attacking you all


And now the punishment has come

and my pirate life is done

by Ubayd Ibnzafar (10)
Halley Primary School - London

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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