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A Journey To The Valley Of Kings

The blazing sun shone, loose limestone toppled down among the colossal structures of Egypt's treasures. Mesmerised, I entered. My mind was bursting with fear and excitement, for I was about to uncover Tutankhamun's mystery. However, I was being stalked by a pair of grey eyes as I travelled through the tomb.

Soon, I reached the crypt. Eagerly, I opened it. My heart froze in horror: the coffin was empty and the beast made its way forward, closer and closer. I woke up in alarm, not a soul to be heard in the darkness of the tomb.

by Denise Grzymkowska (Runner-Up) (11)
Amesbury Archer Primary School - Wiltshire

Competition - Ancient Adventures

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