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An Important Message

That night, I was in my coop being fed birdseed when I heard shouts: 'Enemy ambush!' My troops were surrounded by German soldiers. Corporal Smith tied a canister with a message to my back. I had to reach the other base to help my soldiers. 'Fly to the other base and get help!' whispered Corporal Smith. As soon as I heard that, I took off. It was amazing, I could feel the air through my feathers. I could hear guns, I was very scared but I got my message through. As I rested, I knew they were all safe.

by Will McQueenie (Runner-Up) (9)
Kentisbeare CE Primary School - Devon

Competition - Ancient Adventures

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